要怎麼樣的英文作文才能在大學英文指考拿到高分呢？
要拿高分，你的作文必須要：
「文章內容豐富、組織條理分明，文意連貫性佳；文法、句構、用字、拼字大致正確，並符合英文書寫體例」
這邊幫大家節錄兩篇103年指考的英文作文佳作
讓大家看看什麼樣的英文作文能在指考拿下高分 
首先我們來看看題目長什麼樣子：
103年考圖表題，內容為美國學生一天作息時間分配。
高分的作文在第一段要能敘述並指出美國學生一天作息時間分配特別之處。
第二段則要開始分析自己 (台灣)的一天作息表與美國學生有何不同；或是可以分析圖表中項目對學生的幫助與意義為何，如果不太擅長分析，也可以敘述自己一天的生活經驗。
下筆之前記得先做思緒延伸，可能的話，列個大綱，整理一下自己的想法後再下筆，才不會導致文章結構混亂沒有重點喔！
103指考 英文作文佳作 (E1)
According to the graph which represents how students in an American high school live their day, the students spend 6.4 hours learning and having some related activities, 1.5 hours working part time jobs, 3.8 hours having their leisure time, 0.8 hours exercising, and 0.2 hours doing religious and voluntary things. What’s special is that they spend only 6.4 hours learning and spend 8.7 hours sleeping, which means that they spend more time on sleeping than learning. In Asian countries, it is never acceptable because Asians think that diligence is the key to success. You need to study more than you sleep. Moreover, they spend 3.8 hours social and leisure time every day, and that is half of the time they spend on learning.
As far as I am concerned, I go to school at eight, and go home at five. At school, we learn for the whole day. After school, I usually go home. At night, I study; I go to bed at eleven. Therefore, the total time I learn and study is thirteen hours, and I only spend one hour watching TV, seven hours sleeping, and no time hanging on Facebook or other social networks. How I have my day is extremely different from the American students. The reason why we are so different is that our thoughts and policies are not similar. What Americans place emphasis on is creativity and whether kids are happy or not. They give students more time to think rather than do unnecessary works. In contrast, Asians thinks that the more time you spend on studying, the more successful you will be in the future, so they make kids stay at school for more than eight hours a day to study and learn, and go to bed later at night. However, not all children are suitable for this kind of lifestyle. For example, some people may have more talent in exercising, nut they don’t have enough time or don’t have any opportunity to find it. Hence, there are a lot of things that we can do to adjust our lifestyle in the future.
大考中心評語：
一、第一段明確而詳細地描述表格之內容，並清楚點出圖表各項數字比較之後所顯現的特質。第二段則清楚說明自己一天生活的安排與圖表中美國學生之不同，並暗示亞洲學生的時間安排有改進空間。
二、全文內容充實，條理分明，結構完整，用字精準，文筆流暢。
103指考 英文作文佳作 (E6)
The chart shows how high school students in American spend their day. Averagely, each of them spends 8.7 hours on sleeping, 6.4 hours on their studies, 3.8 hours on social and leisure activities, 1.5 hours on their part-time jobs, 0.8 hour on exercising, 0.2 hour on cultural activities and volunteer work, and 2.6 hours on others things. To my astonishment, it seems that American high school students spend rather little time on their studies, with only one-fourth of their entire day. In addition, they spend almost the same proportion of time on extracurricular activities, such as chatting with friends, working, exercising and many others things they like. On top of that, sleeping takes the most time of their day, with more than eight hours a day, which is definitely impossible for me to do that.
By contrast, my life is exceedingly different. First, I spend more than 12 hours on my studies every day. As a senior who is facing one of the most important exam in my life, curricular work definitely takes most of the time of my day. After having classes for nine hours at school, I have to study for at least 3 more hours at home to review the things I learn that day and even preview the lessons for classes tomorrow. Second, I spend only 6 hours a day. At this point, however, it is impossible to do so. Last but not least, it comes to the 3 hours I spend on my leisure activities. After deducting the time I spend on commuting, taking shower, eating, and all the other trivialities, there is 2 hour left for me to relieve me from all the tiring school work. The two hours are divided into two parts. First, I will spend half an hour doing yoga every day, which always takes away all the stress and makes me feel refreshing after doing it. Then, I will flung myself in the sofa and sprawl, watching some TV series and giving my brain a break. The reason why me and students in America spend the day so differently is cultural differences. They emphasize more on the creative use of leisure time. Therefore, they spend more time on the athletic fields, the music classroom, and so on. In contrast, people in Taiwan put more emphasis on school work, on academic performances and scores, which comes from the concept deeply rooted in our hearts that diploma counts a lot. And that makes all the difference.
大考中心評語：
一、第一段先整體說明表格呈現的內容，然後詳列細節並將訊息間的關係作清楚的比較。第二段概列個人與其他學生作息相同處，然後仔細說明個人作息特殊之處，最後簡要提出台灣、美國兩地差異的成因，作為總結。
二、內容豐富，句型變化多，篇章轉折運用佳；詞意明確，修辭佳。
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